Tuesday, September 22, 2015
The "Birth" of Poison Study
I sparked on the idea of writing about a food/poison taster when I was reading Orson Scott Card's book, How to Write Science Fiction and Fantasy. It was the chapter on characters and a scene jumped into my mind of a King who had fallen in love with his food taster and she was just about to taste his meal and it was probably poisoned, BUT she had to do it. So he watches her in heartbreaking horror...
I never did write that scene! But it started me asking questions. Who was this food taster? Why was she there? Why was the King worried about being poisoned? I decided the King would be a practical type and he wouldn't want to use one of his loyal subjects as a poison taster, so he offers the next person in line to be executed the job. Then that triggers more questions, why is she on death row? Once she takes the job, what keeps her from escaping? And are readers really going to like a protagonist who murdered a man? (Yes, if she has a damn good reason!)
I started writing the book in the beginning of 1997. Despite having a very energetic 2 year old boy, I wrote a couple chapters with a King. The King's name is D'Ambrosia and the murdered Duke's son is Reyad and I have three names listed for the King's Chief of Security: Valek, Valello, and Valerio!
I see a contest for Great Beginnings and decide to enter my first chapter. The contest is sponsored by Pennwriters and is part of their annual writing conference. In May 1997, I travel to Pittsburgh to attend a fantastic conference where I learn all about writing and publishing. I don't win the Great Beginnings contest, but I DID get wonderful feedback from one of the judges - Ms. Kate Elliott (one of my favorite authors and one of the reasons I attended the con). She really enjoys the story and thinks the food taster is unique, but she suggests lots of changes to make it stronger and I decide to try to make my fantasy stand out from all the others, so I kill off the monarch and decide to have a military dictatorship instead. Oh, and I still plan to have the Commander and Yelena fall in love as per my original idea.
After I meet Kate and she encourages me to continue with the story, I'm very bold and ask her if she'd like to read a revision of the first chapter. She says YES!! I still have her note about the revisions it begins: Dear Maria - Wow! The new draft is much stronger. At this point you're right of course to not do any further rewriting until you've finished the first draft. I love the poison names, by the way!
I'm cheeky again and ask if I can send her the completed draft when it's finished. Again she says YES! Another happy dance!
I continue working on the book until my daughter is born in October 1997 and then I take 6 months off. Re-starting in May 1998, I write one chapter a month to give to my writing critique group for feedback. Having that small goal helps and I finish the first draft in January 2000!!! By this time, lots of my original ideas for the story has changed - Spoiler - the Commander and Yelena do not fall in love and Valek turns from an antagonist into a protagonist!
I spend the next six months revising and then send a few queries out to literary agents and get rejections in return. Then I receive feedback from Kate Elliott in January 2001 (She read the entire book and given me excellent feedback and suggestions. Her kindness is why I'm teaching and mentoring writing students at Seton Hill University - to help other writers like Kate helped me).
Another six months's worth of revisions and by June 2001, I believe the book is ready to be sent out to agents and publishers.
Approximately 4 years from start to finish!! Of course I wasn't working on the story full time - being home with two young kids doesn't give you a lot of time :) And once I finished Poison Study, I started working on Storm Watcher while I worked on revisions. At that point, Poison Study was a stand alone novel - no sequel was planned, but I did think I could write another only IF I managed to sell Poison Study to a publisher (self-publishing wasn't an option at that time!).
Next post will be on The "Trials" of Poison Study